Crooks and Bones

L3 - GROUP 4 (Elliott, Matt & Rob) Film Opening Rough Cut from cmdiploma on Vimeo.

Feedback for Elliott, Max and Rob's Crooks and Bones film opening

I particularly liked the fish eye lens in the car, it worked really well however I wasn't too keen on it being used in the house, I just don't think it was necessary.
There was also a lot of nicely framed shots, like the shot of Elliott in bed with the lit cigarette in focus which looks effective.














The camera movement used also works well and there is a variety of different shots.

After they work a bit more on editing and add titles and a soundtrack, I think it should really come together and look like a proper film opening.